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Tortured Soul

Am I brave enough to capture
The mighty black stallion before me?
This eagerness in which I contend
The power of dominance has no fear
But this waning distance between us remains uncertain
Whether it's fact or fiction
I can't even tell the difference
I am not a genius when it comes to rare discoveries
Midst a wild land that rings eternal and vast
Oh what a lonely sight to see
A rage beyond a doubt
As the plot thickens
So do the depths of my mind's despair
I must go against the laws of Cupid
And this heart may prevail in the nick of time
Isn't it grand?
Love is racing in the air, ah
The most gorgeous of all things
A tortured soul
Living and breathing
But not entirely free
Come...come with me oh mighty stallion
Let us chase the world all the way to the heavens
I too am a tortured soul
A victim of my own beautiful suspense
It's what nature intended
Being free is a state of mind
But in my mind
I am never free.

Submitted: Thursday, January 23, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Leah Ayliffe (3/18/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    This is beautiful. So very beautiful and haunting.
    Let us chase the world all the way to the heavens
    I too am a tortured soul
    A victim of my own beautiful suspense
    It's what nature intended
    Being free is a state of mind
    But in my mind
    I am never free.

    Just intoxicating to read.

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  • Aqua Flower (2/1/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    The flow of this poem is gorgeous! I love the way your write! Thank you for sharing your gift!

  • * Sunprincess * (1/29/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    ........so picturesque...I like it very much
    ~The most gorgeous of all things
    A tortured soul
    Living and breathing
    But not entirely free
    Come...come with me oh mighty stallion
    Let us chase the world all the way to the heavens~

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