Torn And Tattered Heart Poem by louis rams

Torn And Tattered Heart

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my heart is torn and tattered
it seems like nothing else matters
i gave my heart, soul, and mind
and thought it would last for a long time.

you find someone which you grow to love and
it gets deeper and higher than the stars above.
you feel that this love will forever last
but it becomes part of the past.
when you see this person change their points of view
but! not to satisfy you.

just to satisfy their blown egos and their conceit
and your love they could never meet.
and now your heart is a divided road with
nowheres to go.
you pick up the pieces of your torn heart
and look for another place to start.

this torn and tattered heart knows it must
pick itself up again-and start the search all anew
in hopes that it'll find someone better than you.

someone who will appreciate all the love
that you have to give.
for in the long run they will win.
they'll win a heart which has gotten strong
and with you it will belong.

this is my heart which i give to you- which will
no longer be sad or blue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather S 04 April 2009

wow, well said poem great peice Love Heather Stephens

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WONDEFUL i love the beginning perfect piece of work KRISTA

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amen... I been there, done that! ! beautiful piece! !

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Sarah Sisson 09 January 2009

I've been there! You will pick up those pieces!

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