Too Kind Poem by Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years

Too Kind

Rating: 5.0


Oh frail my heart
kindness pray spare me
the tip touching of paper fingers
gentle water my cheeks

Apr 97

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 09 June 2006

Remarkably succinct imagery...

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Will Barber 09 June 2006

This is remarkable. Are you sure you haven't a few more in the notebook? I mean, anyone who writes this one must have more than 5 poems stashed away. Just remarkable.

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Duncan Wyllie 12 May 2006

I could melt into this one with ease, you've put this so well, Love Duncan

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Dorothy Pugin

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South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years
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