Too Cute... Poem by Soumita Sarkar
Too Cute...
an infatuation grew in me.....outmoded..outlandish...illogically true......how about a short love story..?
And got hooked
but, who is that crook?
That lad not so cute
Yet managed his cuts
into my manoeuvred mask
Ha! and I stood still
when he gazed and killed
To urge a straight reply
It's a drill to resist the feel
Man are you mad?
You teach don't forget
You foil your page
Cause-a sweet deviate
This close connection
Shall spell distress
You'll manage as you handled
Novice'll dwindle and battle
A shake of your hand
Will be a treasure
Years later a memory for you
His touch of a crushing pleasure
You can't ask -Do you miss?
Never exchange -Yes I miss.
This all fuss is just a mess
You are far in age and flesh.
Franklu, not as good as the other poems of yours that I have read, but it does speak of something really valuable... Love always begins with infatuation and if it doesn't change from their into something more mature and rational... Ya, it's complicated. Thank you for sharing..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 2:39:11 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi Soumita, A good poem of love and passion. But your passion for rhyme without reason made you compromise on POETRY. Pl see for yourselves: Man you are mad! After that I am sad Who is labelled bad? This close connection Has made us true glad. More rhyme, less poetry here. Truly unlike your other poems. You always do retain quality of your poetry above all. So my request, please do not give in for the temptation of rhymes, play of words etc, at the cost of poetic quality, brevity which are truly characteristic of your poems. Would love to read more of them.