Tonight I Will Make You Mine Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Tonight I Will Make You Mine



Tonight it's just you and me
Give in my heart ecstasy

Tonight my dreams will come true
In my arms I will hold you

Tonight I won't switch off light
To see you and feel alright

Tonight I will kiss you jaan
Like pellets of a popgun

Tonight we will sing and dance
In breathtaking wild romance

Tonight I will let you know
I am like your sweet shadow

Your body is like old wine
Tonight I will make you mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 28 November 2012

very emotional and beautifully crafted...really enjoyed this one

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 28 November 2012

like that sweet shadow.... I will always be an avid reader of ur creations, not for u may be happy, but they are so passionate, full of brilliant expressions, & a longing desire to unleash.........

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 November 2012

very nice.full of love and passion.liked it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 November 2012

very nice.full of love and passion.liked it.

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Unwritten Soul 28 November 2012

You are very well known as a romantic poet and writers, you have that skill tht able to melt red blooded feeling into the jar of heart..nice work, keep it up_Soul

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Sankaran Ayya 09 December 2012

Though sensual poem is good and expresses romantic passion with in poetic border line Tonight my dreams will come true In my arms I will hold you -nice romantic line Tonight I won't switch off light To see you and feel alright -what does it mean? OVER ALL NICE POEM. -KAVIN CHARALAN

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 06 December 2012

tonight i will make u mine cos ur body is like old wine. wow! i love this poem Asif. love freely express with the desire of wanting. nice expression.

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 30 November 2012

This is superb. Wel done asif

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So Close 29 November 2012

another one touches my heart...the last lines are excellent

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Chandra Thiagarajan 29 November 2012

A good romantic write right from the heart.Hope your love would like it, Thanks for the kind invite to read this poem Also my thanks are due for going through my poems and offering your kind remarks. Best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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