Tonight I Think Ill Let The Winter Take Me Poem by Ben Partenay

Tonight I Think Ill Let The Winter Take Me

Rating: 5.0


Dusk to dusk
And head to pillowcase
And tonight I think
I'll let the winter
Take me

Pace and pace
Until everything is too tired
To ever dream of
Ever being tired
Again

Smile and nod
Shake hand after hand after
Promise after hand
Until the hand falls off
With the truth

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Shiver more when the cold
Is brand new and
The image of green grass
Is still fresh

Wander this place
Search for another world
With a black moon
And a god that says
I’m here

But dusk to dusk
And head to pillowcase
And tonight I think
I'll let a promise
Take me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 05 December 2006

Dreamy, mystical write Ben, delightful to the eye and mind. Thank you for posting it. It was a pleasure to view. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alexzia Ferdinand 04 December 2006

nice one big brother-i like the acceptance and the wistful tone, i know how this feels....write on-Alexzia

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