Together..... My Love And I Poem by Lora Colon

Together..... My Love And I

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When tempests rage and sunbeams flee,
And the deluge pours from the sky,
All fury unfurled cannot quake my world
When we're together, my love and I

Depose the moon, let darkness fall,
Remove all the stars from on high,
In the still of night, I will find my light
When we're together, my love and I

Let the wind blow its icy chill,
Let it taunt me..... just let it try!
Icy wind, depart! There's fire in my heart
When we're together, my love and I

Crush the roses, leaving but thorns,
There'll be no tears, my eyes are dry,
His love's bouquet is refreshed everyday,
When we're together, my love and I

Should birdsong cease - my sweet delight,
My response will be just a sigh,
His kisses are songs for which my heart longs
When we're together, my love and I

When anguish overtakes my heart,
Then straight to his arms I must fly,
Your pity's in vain, for I feel no pain
When we're together, my love and I

When the sea swallows our last sun,
Our spirits will be soaring high,
We'll climb to the stars, shrugging off life's scars,
Always together..... my love and I

Saturday, July 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 01 December 2019

1 - 1 - i bet i can do better here than that (other) creepy (ha ha) " Brian" ! stanza 1: Interesting use of " depose" . stanza 3: my favorite...so far stanza 4: i'd redo first two lines a bit stanza 5: favorite line: " His kisses are songs for which my heart longs" stanza 6: ok, but... stanza 7: good, but i'd tweak it NOW do you see why i've been divorced x3?

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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2014

Such beautiful heartwarming poem. For those together in love nothing else matters. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.

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Brian Johnston 17 July 2014

Hope your love is not afraid of heights! This is indeed a soaring poem! : -)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 14 July 2014

Yes Lora, love is such a powerhouse within, that you so wonderfully paint.

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Missouri - United States
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