Treasure Island

hazem al jaber

(21 may 1965 / kuwait)

Today is a perfect day...

Today is a perfect day...

a day that will runs its events forever..

will runs into your mind and heart...

and you will never forget this day..

its a day before a day from my birthday...

tomorrow its my birthday...

on this day..

fingers will translate my feelings as a words..

feelings will runs and swims so deep inside you...

the heart will beats more than it used to do...

and my tongue will speaks to you..

will says...i love you...

Today is a perfect day..

today i will write...

i will speak..

and will open my heart...

just to let you know how much i love you...

and why i do love you so...

Today is a perfectt day..

today its my day and yours..

no one else can feel my thoughts...

no one can touch my soul..

no one can melt my heart as you always do..

no one will wish me a best wishes..

and a happy birthday as you...

Today is a perfect day..

its a day before a day from my birthday..

tomorrow its our day..

its a day that we will together celebrate my birthday...

our loves` birthday...


Submitted: Wednesday, May 20, 2009
Edited: Saturday, May 23, 2009

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  • Alison Cassidy (5/23/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    A passionate, romantic poem with love at its heart. Your repetition of the 'chorus' of the piece is excellent. I wonder though, don't you mean 'perfect' rather than 'prefect'? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (5/20/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    Another beautifully expressed and well crafted poem.
    Full of emotional intensity displaying your innermost feelings.
    A very well deserved 10/10.
    Thank You for sharing Hazem. (Report) Reply

  • Naidz Ladia (5/20/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    the best day of your life
    means additional age for you
    the whole world celebrates
    not anyone forgets..

    this day is the happiest day
    where your mom gave her life
    and your dad prepared the best food
    for your mom who in many hours suffers her pains
    just to bring you in this world..

    don't forget that this day
    is also your mother's new life
    so please say thanks to her
    she will be happy for that..

    also accept my heartfelt wishes for you
    i wish you goodhealth and more wealth
    wish you contentment in life
    wish you the best of everything..

    dear, happy birthday
    a hug and a kiss will always be unforgetable
    accept it as a gift to you
    from philippines to your place..

    make your day fine,
    make your life colorful
    i'll always send my prayers
    for you to be always safe..

    happy birthday.....we love you....naizz (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (5/20/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    sweet and romantic...
    touching...the thoughts are really lovely...
    dazzling with innermost feelings...

    _maia_ (Report) Reply

  • Lalitha iyer (5/20/2009 3:48:00 AM)


    a little baby
    grown upto the sky
    the blues he touches
    with soft pink cheeks
    the heart of soft
    it pours verses sweet
    only to wake up
    the sadder hearts
    cradling gloomy minds to sleep
    lulling them with lovely words
    for a brighter tomorrow
    and bubbling healthy life
    With a heart of
    pure sincerity and love... (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (5/20/2009 1:52:00 AM)

    Happy Birthday always offer us a romatic and sizzling poetry crafted by your inspired mind........Lovely poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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