Today Poem by Daniel Hoffman
Today
Today the sun rose, as it used to do
When its mission was to shine on you.
Since in unrelenting dark you're gone,
What now can be the purpose of the sun?
Mission has to shine on you as aroused sun does in day. Wonderful presentation really.
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. Few poets know when to stop writing- they keep penning more words which take the glow away from the perfect lines. Awesomely written and awesomely terminated in the right place
- In Italian: Oggi Anche oggi il sole è sorto, come faceva Quando aveva la missione di brillare su di te. Ma dal momento che sei scomparsa nell'inesorabile tenebra, Quale mai può essere, ora, lo scopo del sole?
What can I say that the others have not. A brilliant piece, Daniel. Thanks
This is an emotion felt by many that you have captured so well in a few words. Great write, keep writing.
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4/18/2024 5:43:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful Sad Such a few words to express so much Great read Great write Thanks BB