To You My Valentine…14-2 12 Poem by saadat tahir

To You My Valentine…14-2 12

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(to far off isles … to bob on shores… sealed with a kiss)

Hey!
An angel whispered me.
Said,
all the roses that you see.
Butterflies,
and the ceaseless honey bee.
They,
so happy gay and free,
add,
such color to our world,
on,
these amazing sunny days,
Pray,
you heard what I had to say,
gazing,
out an azure lapping bay,
It's,
so due jingles of her birthday.
Otherwise,
wouldn't be a beautiful sunny day,
never,
Until she graced this worldly way.
You!
Tender and gorgeous dreamy babe,
Always,
giggle and tell me to behave.


original
14 Feb - 2k12
Islamabad.

S'She knows….S'she smiles!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 13 February 2012

A really great poem, like it. A great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 19 February 2012

it's a nice humping jumping rhythm... beautiful write for your valentine :) New way too, it's different than other poem you have written :) I am so sure you adore azure words too much...ubiquitous in any poem of yours.. Keep happy always_Unwritten Soul

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Shihabudheen K J 26 May 2012

All kinds of fantasy feeling for me.might be great reality for lovers.good write

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Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

So sensual and so abundant in vision. On the wings of love we fly. Beautiful. Thank you! :)

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Adeline Foster 09 May 2012

Interesting format here, and it does work. Lovely. Adeline

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I like the way you make the words cohisive and so smooth, I can tauch the smoothness and the flexibility in this poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 February 2012

A lovely, light piece of writing. Best regards Sally. (try Valentine when you have a spare minute)

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