' To The Sleepless Bells Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili
' To The Sleepless Bells
TO THE SLEEPLESS BELLS
(TO THE POET CHUMMED UP
WITH A VERSEZ...)
The melody – the element of poetry…
A song to the poet
Chummed up with a verse…
That all the dreams
Flower at night
Poets knows better
Than anyone else…
They know that the dull notes
Of all the broken hearts
Can’t humble the treasured rhyme,
The rhyme they can’t lower…
They know that inspiration
And the nine heavenly gates
Brighten up the rhythm,
And make it flower…
The same with the major,
With the sacred remoteness,
The everlasting life,
Or the first word,
The honored word
Uttered in time…
The song to the poet
Chummed up with a verse,
Who was taken ill,
And by the verse was healed…
The sleepless bells
Rang in the chapel…
And I prayed to the
Queen of Angels…
2.03.08 Tsira gogeshvili
This is a very complacted write, and crafted very well, No one has givin it a score, It was no problem for me to give it a ten, Excellent penning, Tsira
The sleepless bells Rang in the chapel… And I prayed to the Queen of Angels --------- It echoed into the clouds' lever - the end of hyberbole - Nothing less than a blur hope - the Queen must be blind - sincere -
This was a very creative piece that was much clearer than the last. Therefore, the meaning was transmitted. The truly fine element which elevates the score is the composition. It was excellant. GW62
Something about your writing, Tsira, always leaves me feeling refreshed.... as if 'And by the verse was healed' is true of yours for me.. I should find more time to come to your healing pages.. Thanks for this lovely piece.. jim xxx
Ageless as all true poetry must be. Your last lines are simply superb.10 for your eloquence. Love, Sandra
How did i misss this pen gem? ! I like this piece a lot, T...Your penchant for inventive language that captures the Readers fancy, is darting...as is this smmooth, sweeping poem that flows like water past a river-break...Bravo, young lady! FjR
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4/19/2024 10:03:41 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Oh Tsira, I am truly honoured, and held somewhat speechless. This is eloquent, and you surely lifted my spirits on a day they really needed it. I will have to return to say more than this later. Thank you ever so much. All my hopes, Gregory