To Part Away Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

To Part Away

Rating: 5.0


Express through eyes
Even without any try
It shall show the gratitude
With thanks and attitude

“Sorry, please” we often say and pass off
The same story is repeated for laugh
It has hollow gesture
Not carrying any further

See in the beggar’s eye and face
You will find respite from chase
At least some thing you have dropped worthwhile
That is enough to please him with smile

Pay little to any needy person
You may have pleasant moments with many reasons
It gives you hidden joy with no more excitement
Yet you are relieved from worrisome moment

It is happiness not for giving away
But for joy on seeing the reception in special way
One is feeling happy while receiving
One is feeling right while giving

Some of the ways are unparallel
They speak so nice and well
Each individual feels same way
Only lack some will power to part away

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Express through eyes Even without any try

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Strength! Yoshi Allen21 minutes ago This poem is powerful and has a way with words. I like the 5th stanza because it stuck out to me and made me think about a lot. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

good Sai Krishna28 minutes ago good

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