To Our Amazing Creator Poem by Aufie Zophy

To Our Amazing Creator

Rating: 4.8


Our Amazing Creator, so full of Grace,
So full of Forgiveness and Fatherly Traits
Lots of Praise and lots of Thanks we give
For this Wonderful World and the Fact that we Live.

We dream of Your Kingdom
Somehow It will come
Somewhere in the World or high in the Sky
We will see Its full Glory after we die.

Amazing Creator of Night and of Day,
To You we ask for help and to You do we pray,
Help us to serve You however we may,
Help us to see and do all things in Your way.

This little prayer, how small it may be
I hope it will help me, help me to see
To see all the things that You'd like me to do
To help where I can and be faithful to You

(Bachok,19 May,2010)

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
if we manage to pray with meaning, it is a whole new experience
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 24 May 2010

Amazing Creator of Night and of Day, To You we ask for help and to You do we pray, Help us to serve You however we may, Help us to see and do all things in Your way. Beautiful poem. 'Night and Day' could also be interpreted as suffering and joy here.

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Absolutely wonderful. Love this poem. Love Creation

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2010

Amazing Creator of Night and of Day, To You we ask for help and to You do we pray, Help us to serve You however we may, Help us to see and do all things in Your way. you are very religious. Spiritual minded poets can offer a lot to the humanity

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Bri Edwards 23 August 2019

if our " Creator" was full of Mercy, She would have created (and KEPT) humans without " sin" or any other negative attributes, ..... AND would make each life a happy one. Oh, well, it's just MY OPINION. : ( bri

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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2015

A well articulated devotional poem to the HIGH AND LOFTY ONE - GOD ALMIGHTY. A beautiful pray showing Total Submission to His Will. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 30 March 2012

amazing verse! i hove no words to describe my attitude to the poem, because it is perfect in its meaning. it contains a great mystery and bright light energy, that can change our imagination about life treasure) . wonderful poem) i love it very much. bravo

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Lynn Glover 09 June 2010

I love this poem, Aufie, and hope you don't mind if I say it also for me. I love the inspirational and uplifting tone of the poem and along with just great rhyming scheme. A very nice poem better than a 10. Your friend Lynn

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Jeesa Rose 29 May 2010

Amazing Creator of Night and of Day, To You we ask for help and to You do we pray, it is a beautiful prayer. Happy to know that you are a religious poet. the desire for God fill our hearts more than anything. thank you

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