David Wood

Rookie - 339 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

To my sweet love Poem by David Wood


I lay here dreaming that you love me
In that half twilight world between sleep
And being awake just before dawn
When it is neither night nor day.

And a tear comes to my eye as I cannot
Have your affection. In this dream you
Are smiling at me with your iridescent eyes
Of limpid blue looking softly through

The haze of that smoky mist of dreams.
Your soft mellow brow twinkles a
Beguile wanton softness as I slumber
In this my twilight world.

I gaze and in that flood of limpid blue
My spirit wanders free. Only that now
The new dawn begins to wake me from
My slumber and my lonely torture begins.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 11, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (11/5/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    A melancholic poetry.... love gone as one awakens from dream to sad reality! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,183 Points Valerie Dohren (10/19/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    A lovely poem David, and yes I can surely relate. The loneliness is hard to bear. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 423 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/17/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    She is never gone as long as you care to remember
    And at your bedside unseen she will always stand
    And someday or some night you will eventually join her
    To hold hands once again in a more beautiful land

    (good touching poem Sir, - welcome to my site too) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 284 Points Joseph Anderson (10/9/2013 12:44:00 PM)

    It is so hard to let them go. A sadly beautiful, bittersweet write. I feel your pain from
    this touching poem.Perhaps a new start would heal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/19/2013 9:04:00 PM)

    Your poems Poet exude the scents of flowers even when is a sad poem. A beautiful describe of lost love. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,591 Points Noreen Carden (9/18/2013 2:27:00 PM)

    Hi David what a beautiful poem a lovely one to read well written (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (9/18/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    beautiful writing touching (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/15/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Ah! A poet heart beats fast inside the chest! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,252 Points Sekharan Pookkat (9/15/2013 6:08:00 AM)

    A lovely poem-The new dawn of love begins (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,549 Points Lyn Paul (9/14/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful words David. Everyone just presumes that you just soldier on. Let us hope your strength can, yet nuture these memories. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/13/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    dreamy love and lovely dream, I liked it much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/12/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Touching indeed. Lovely dream knowingly it will bring tears to your eyes..
    Heartfelt. Loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,811 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/12/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    Deep feelings of missing affection expressed in the poem. The feeling is all the more intense just before dawn when one does not know what world one is in. Only way out may be to remember all the pleasant times. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/11/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    A golden leaf like a wrapped with sweet memory floating into the mind tinge of life lovely poem thank u (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,232 Points Ramesh Rai (9/11/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    a very touching write.tears rolled down. no more comment. wish to read it again n again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,281 Points Valsa George (9/11/2013 7:59:00 AM)

    A moving write, echoing a sense of longing and loss!

    The new dawn begins to wake me from
    My slumber and my lonely torture begins.

    It is when the world teems with activity, that one is reminded more of one's loneliness! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (9/11/2013 6:45:00 AM)

    A really wonderful poem, sometimes when we are between waking and dreaming
    it can seem so real. a fantastic write. (Report) Reply

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