To My Mentor Poem by Alice Cuenca

To My Mentor

Rating: 4.1


slinking around your shadow
covering tracks and wearing mask
as i continue this journey
i give up part of myself
pain and joy
the price of molting

as truth illuminates,
closeness is established
as we continue to navigate this difficult path
the path travelled less
a difficult path
to truth and freedom

thank you my friend
for sitting down with me
it is indeed a pleasure

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erhard Hans Josef Lang 26 April 2008

a dignified dedication to a true master of one's soul & heart!

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Melvin Banggollay 28 April 2008

yOU HAVE A WONDERFUL POEM OF EXPRESSING YOUR JOY FOR YOUR MENTOR'S HAND IN SHARING YOU THE LIGHT OF WHAT YOU HAVE LEARNED... KEEP WRITING DEAR KABABAYAN, THANKS, MELVIN

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you give praise to the people who cares for you..amazing write..simply marvelous!

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Tom Balch 15 August 2008

what a lovely piece, very well writen regards Tom

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Stone Granite 31 May 2008

I'm sure it was your mentor's pleasure as much as it was yours. Your homage to this mentor is inspiring. You have a beautiful way of expression.

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Kee Thampi 16 May 2008

we must be truthful for them thank you my friend for sitting down with me it is indeed a pleasure

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Ying Escalona 29 April 2008

tinuod gyod ka Judge

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