To My Dear Brother Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

To My Dear Brother



You, a guy with the spirit of brave fire
Who I start to notice and admire
Though you may be a little star,
I bet your future is priceless pearl!

You, a guy of impressive confidence
Who I have to pay respects
Though I can't follow you,
May be as great winter's fellow dew!

You, a guy of excellent abilities
Who I can't stand without complimentary
Though I'm not pretty clever
You force me write poems forever!

You, a guy known as an extrovert
Who I also name Mr.Busy Bird
Though you are a little lazy(Just kidding! !)
You wrote a poem, 'Gift' for me
Really thanks for great present unique! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem refers to my dear brother..Aung Si....
I can't find the words to thank you for paying attention to write a gift poem in honor of my birthday...This is for you, enjoy it..but I am not sure you will like this or not..
If there is some points that can make you feel upset..please forgive me..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 September 2012

Your brother should proud of him self because of having a sister like you. this poem is perfect. give my best regards to your bro.

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Aung Si 08 September 2012

Thank u very much indeed.Words fail me! I'll compose about u in English.It will be a mirror for u.

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Kathrin P. 09 September 2012

excellent work! keep it up! you're a very fantastic poet

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So Close 12 September 2012

excellent lines..which explains how you are loving your bro.... i hope such a nice sister you too...

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Captain Cur 12 September 2012

Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Sowmiya 19 July 2018

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Gjc Brisso 18 September 2012

nice one for your brother he must be so proud of you

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Eman Obied 16 September 2012

wow, this is so beautiful.he's lucky to have you as a sister.keep writing.wonderful

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Very good indeed. Compassionate and loving. A strong and direct message which fosters family relations. Good encouragement in a good poem.

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Stevie Taite 13 September 2012

A beautiful write. I love the feel I dialect I get from your unique use of language! Great!

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