To Mend My Broken Heart Poem by Terry jones

To Mend My Broken Heart

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to mend my broken heart it will take time
to mend my broken heart it will take strength
and untill my heart is mended i will try not to fell soure like a lime
i will try to chose who i give my heart to carefuly for if i just give it away who knows how it shall brake and make me start agin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Johnson 24 October 2008

Well, my friend it looks good, keep on writing, I like the idea..

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Chocolate Bunny 26 October 2008

I get this poem. Good job on it. hope your heart does get mended

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Arabian Heart 27 October 2008

Such a thing to mend to heal, to put back together once something is broken who would want it fixed maybe it will be done quicker when you find the right doctor. please make more for my heart to read.

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Said El Banna 13 February 2009

Hi Dante very well deep emotions inside you heart.And I see you have a white heart, so keep on it.very nice words.war......10 S.E

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Annie Girl 13 November 2008

one word and its trust u got to trust someone and know them well...

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Cherish Anderson 13 November 2008

ur only 14 u dnt need to worry about love! ! ! yea it takes time to mend a broken heart but u gotta get over it cuz theres more fish in da sea! ! ! ! jus move on n dont look bak! ! !

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 October 2008

It's really sad to hear the word 'Mending', specially a broken heart, but keep the faith and there will be an answer?

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<font color =fusha>Amy 28 October 2008

short, simple but surprisingly super hehe

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