To Look Ahead Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

To Look Ahead

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I love to sing
For self and children to bring
About the future to be bright
With more struggle and fight

It is good to prepare
For better tomorrow and dare
It is real spirit to work with
And dream to be armed with teeth

If all people think of golden tomorrow
I shall certainly divert some of the energy to allow
For our environment to adjust
As it is necessary for development of trust

No one knows what is in store
But we need to explore
Future for our children]
And country even

It is citizen’s heaven
That shall develop slowly into garden
With colorful flowers
In diversity and honor

How many races might have mushroomed?
The dark clouds might have been gloomed
There may remain no scope for unrest
This course shall be the best

No country can afford
To be different with words
There is one scope to look forward
Promises in mind to look ahead and lead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 March 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 March 2014

not bad Kat Challis7 hours ago 1st stanza doesn't really belong- it's distracting the last stanza: Promises in mind to look (ahead) and lead ahead is not necessary to get your point through. Keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 March 2014

Like 5 hours ago by langconro Holland to To look ahead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 March 2014

Like 6 hours ago by Ginger Blue to To look ahead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2014

I love to sing For self and children to bring

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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