*to Grandpa.....Help Poem by Shelby Renee

*to Grandpa.....Help

Rating: 2.8


Grandpa
Dear Grandpa, please help me
Im in such a bind
I need your help
I need you to tell me
The answer that all people try to find
They see no wrong
They see no hurt
In what they say and do
Im at the end
The end of this tiring search
So now Im looking to the heavens and have come to you
Oh Grandpa, they just dont see
They see right in their choices, but theyre so wrong
They've brought these tears
These tears you see here
Its so hard to sing wile they're trying to steal my love song
He gives me love
He gives me happines
He gives me everything, and yet they still dont approve
They see him for his age and who he was
Not who he is
But you, dear Grandpa, you, in heaven, know the truth
I know you see the true love
I know you see the destiny that we share with eachother
You see that we're meant for eachother and they dont
I feel so betrayed
I feel so hurt
They're trying to take him away and make me alone
Oh Grandpa
Please Grandpa help me
Make them come around and see the truth
Make them see
See that we really are meant to be
They wont listen to me, but they might to you
Oh Grandpa
My loving Grandpa
Thank you for listening to my cry
I love you now
And I'll love you forever
Please...please grant this wish of mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 23 July 2009

I like your poem.It's a plea from a woman's heart.Heaven will help you and love will find a way. Meanwhile your Grandpa's love sustains you still.

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~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2009

Sometimes we try to reach out and help people understand where they are going wrong..or try to make them see sense before something terrible or just regrettable happens...It's times like you've penned here that we turn to the wise, as they have seen and done many things that will be called upon us at sometime in our lives...We learn by our mistakes, or by the mistakes others have made...The reason behind it....Don't let history be repeated....Wise eyes, wise minds...strong heart....understanding....is a powerful tool...if we use the knowledge wisely......nice work......this piece should not have been marked so low in my opinion.....keep penning, and keep expressing 10

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