To Eternity. Poem by Fay Slimm

To Eternity.

Rating: 5.0


Blood is not
...................the only tie.
Blood-tie in fact,
.................can be a lie.

Soul is tied
............so tight it binds.
Soul-tie leaves
........blood-tie behind.

No tighter bond
..........is in existence.
No soul-tie allows
...................resistance.

Tied thus are we,
................ for certainty,
Tied from now
....................to eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 24 November 2009

The graceful truth, Dear Fay, 10x10... All the best, Tsira

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

we are all tied up to the laws and relationship to the nature and humanity........great poem!

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Carol Gall 24 November 2009

soul is so much more than blood great piece fay 10

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Ency Bearis 24 November 2009

blood is thicker than water as the wise men said....but the soul is more solid committed to eternity....an interesting and intriguing cogitations you had written....10

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Sandra Fowler 24 November 2009

I can hear the music of your soul in this one. These lines are as ageless and beautiful as the poetess who penned them.10/10. Love from your Appalachian friend, Sandra

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This is excellent food that nourishes the soul. Very true perspective.10/10

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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2009

Fay, Superbly penned. Blood and body are false ties They lie, but the eternal soul never dies. CP

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David Harris 26 November 2009

Fay, this demonstrates the sheer wonderment of your pen that what you write can hold us spellbound until the very end. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Ann Beard 25 November 2009

Yes indeed, we are all connected one way or another, but true friendship and love is priceless. Kind regards Ann

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Patti Masterman 24 November 2009

This is very lovely and amazing.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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