To Be Mine Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
To Be Mine
You are destined to be mine
To make me happy and feel fine
Never desert me in any circumstance
It is heavenly and god sent chance
I want no kingdom or empire
But stay behind me and admire
I shall love none else than you
It is my commitment and stands true
Let all our moments play music
As love has been the theme and basic
We are meant to be model
And be guide to others to excel
Be kind and shower all your energy
Upon the thirsty soul as if from almighty
I shall love its enrichment as divine drink
Make me nothing more to think
I had been in sleepless mind
But found you thoroughly kind
Just an identity to have recognition
That had always been inhibition
Tackle me the way you like
The thought was never in mind to strike
You made all that difference
I am ever yours since
Make the pendulum to move
Time may in time prove
That we stand for unity and love
Let everybody trust and believe
Interesting... Daniel Johnson31 minutes ago I am having a hard time trying to figure out exactly what this poem is about. I don't think it is necessarily bad, but, I think you may need to word things differently and choose different words in different places. For example Let all our moments play music, as love has been the theme and basic. Basic by itself is rather odd. Something that may work is Let all our moments play music, as love has been the theme and lyric. Another place that could use some work is We are meant to be model, and be guide to others to excel. Try We are meant to be the model, A Guide for others to excel. I think that this can be made into a wonderful poem, you just need to reword some things and try again.
You are destined to be mine To make me happy and feel fine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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