To Be An Ocean Poem by Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

To Be An Ocean

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When intense emotions are at peak
We have to have some balance in style
For soul's satisfaction we have to seek
For getting of hatred just for a while

Innocence when touches the soul
Love then starts to dance in a mood
Then we understand the beauty
Entranced in love, not being rude

Beauty is to travel on love panels
Love is to spread its light like sun
You and I are two water channels
Who have to be one to be an ocean?


Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2014 Golden Glow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 November 2014

Beautiful poem with its words- When intense emotions are at peak, We have to have some balance in style nice poem thank you

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Hazel Durham 26 November 2014

I love the title and inspired lines that express the sheer beauty of love!

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Soulful Heart 05 January 2015

innocence an asset almost lost in this world.........a treasure that is fast diminishing................very well evaluated its gentle worrth

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Amitava Sur 28 November 2014

Excellent expression of enjoying love, honoring innocence to be a part and parcel to enjoy the true love.Unconditional love is like free flowing water and hence those followers of love unify at last.... very nice. You may read my poem Power of love.

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Valsa George 28 November 2014

Two channels when merged together becomes as mighty as an ocean! Two hearts when melded together in love becomes invincible to all forces of destruction! Great thoughts!

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Sandra Feldman 27 November 2014

Extremely beautiful and fluid and romantic......

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Michael Walkerjohn 26 November 2014

Aloha Col. Khan... My Respects Sir... I have researched your bio'... those in the cloud also... I am beginning my day, off, so I intend to reach out to those that are touching me with all of my intent to produce some happiness, some peacefulness, and lots of that brother and sister hood stuff... I see that you are most proficient with this here engrish language stuff... I, on the other hand, your left... has had a great deal of difficulty mastering any other that it... must of been that big stick wacking the back of my hands that diverted my attentions whilst in school... I have a request... please take one of my posts... and translate verbatim each word into your language... verbatim is key... like gold key... the online services for this purpose, sux weenie... and I have no patience for that game... I believe you will enjoy this exercise, as I, at times, do also... Thank you for this post... as it is spot on...Forgetting of hatred just for a while... would this be that which must be... Read my post Friend in the Desert... and you will peep better my thoughts on your words... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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