Tired Feelings 02 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Tired Feelings 02



Tired sterile pen sleeping
Moonbeam knows palmistry
Barren depressed morning

Tired depressed life dozing
Scorching summer running
Trembling trees bend knees

Tired old noon seeking oasis
Lives conclude new seeds
Cyclic nature playing epic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 26 June 2009

Tired feelings - beautifully expressed shraful 10++

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Catrina Heart 27 June 2009

Hope you won't get three for there are more ways to refresh the doses of depression... Smile always my friend! ! ! : 0) don't cry a river! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 June 2009

like your vocabulary sir... you seems to choose words in a delicate manner, as i say very unique wring style...

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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 June 2009

good one..! !

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Raj Nandy 26 June 2009

LOVELY IMAGERY! 10! -Raj Nandy

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the cyclic nature well expressed...10

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