Tired And Weak Poem by Sandra Kelley

Tired And Weak

Rating: 5.0


Being tired and weak isn't
sin
crime
fault
or flaw


Being tired and weak is
needing help
needing to count of someone
wanting to know someone is there
wanting gudience


Being tired and weak
not the last thing in the world
its the start of a new one
a clearer one


Being tired and weak is and could be
the best thing
happy thing
eye opening thing
clearing up the fog thing


Being tired and weak is human

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i made it up as i went along to be honest, no story, i just wanted to write something wheiether it was good or bad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 30 July 2013

Great poem....Being tired is asking something to refresh and start a new one..Good message..

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

Sometimes life itself can make us weak. A great poem.

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Sandra Kelley

Sandra Kelley

Waco, Texas
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