Tips For Lovers Poem by Justice For All

Tips For Lovers

Rating: 4.2


Open your eyes you will know
that her love is who wants to go
don't try to follow or catch
her love because it's like a flash
put your sadness away
and try to live your day
you might later say
my heart isn't a toy for play
if you ever felt alone
forget she was born
just look up and wish
her love was from the past
be careful be smart
and build a siege
around your heart
hold your soldiers
and give them the order
stay back don't move any closer
hold your tears
and stay away from your fears
throw all the keys
perhaps your heart
will live in peace
don't search for
another queen
the last one was
so selfish and mean
no one deserves to put the crown
no one deserves to rule your town
i pray for your soul each day
to find her soul mate and stay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Fakhira 09 March 2009

Nice tips! I like it... the words are simple yet stylish. Keep it up! A 10...

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Ershad Mazumder 09 March 2009

I am in love with my fiance for many decades. I am yet to meet her. I am just waiting for her.Oneday she will meet me. Your poem is really good. Keep on writing and share with us.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 March 2009

Nice and simple poem for love and lovers. May God accept your prayer! Keep on loving and writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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Costa Anakiev 14 March 2009

not bad, well written, every person has some original ideas. so do you.

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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting

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Saadat Tahir 12 July 2010

a potent and hard hitting statement well penned hold your tears and stay away from your fears throw all the keys perhaps your heart will live in peace don't search for another queen the last one was so selfish and mean cheers

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User Deleted 10 May 2009

aaah! ! this is so nyc nd shwit...great poem!

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Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

well written piece about lovers way...Nice poetic ending you have put up...Thanks!

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Hakurasen Lee 26 March 2009

I love all ur poems! i cant say anything about this one either! lol it was amazing like all ur other work.

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&&angel4ever && 15 March 2009

it`s cool i like the rhyme in the lines and although the in the last lines u stress to avoid love i think u put hope behinds the lines what`s going is better.......well done

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