Tiny Vampire Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Tiny Vampire

Rating: 4.7


The world's number one killer
I wonder why it hasn't yet made its way
Into a horror movie thriller
Why, though it could beat
Even the serial killer!

Oh it gets even past locked doors
Through the tiniest of holes and pores
And however tiny
It bodes fatality
For to many its bites
Have been lethal, fatal
And it sings freely in your ears
But like a teeny weeny vampire

Don't you undermine the miniscule, the minute
For tis a real-life miniature vampire
Tis a blood sucking brute!

And they come in hordes
Without guns or swords
This major yet tiny killer of humans
Though you might kill with a flick of your hands
Yet you could never wipe out the whole band
From the face of the earth
What with its prolific birth!
As this is one flying army here to stay
And by hook or by crook
In each and every nook
It shall share our land!

How terrible that our blood is on its main menu
My and your blood its main staple diet
So I warn you fellow humans
Save yourselves from the anopheles's bite.

Call it mosquito or agent of malaria
Plasmodiums are far worse than any bacteria

And they aren't just doing their job
They're doing their bloody feeding
We ain't in paradise yet: thus both the harmful and harmless are breeding!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 09 May 2013

Very nice poem. Loved it.

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Dave Walker 09 May 2013

A fantastic poem, to think what a tiny bite can do.

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Aadil Masood 10 May 2013

I went on the journey of imagination for some time with this poem. I flew in the airplane of imagination and on the wings of tiny vampires. Nice poem.

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Abdu Musa 10 May 2013

I really enjoyed it, well done!

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 May 2013

A nice poem about blood sucking vampires: - mosquitoes. Enjoyed reading.

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Smoky Hoss 15 March 2021

Very good, and true.

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Kim Barney 10 February 2021

Tiny but deadly indeed!

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Leeann Azzopardi 21 September 2020

if they are bad where you live, they are worst in Ontario Canada! Bravo!

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Kevin Patrick 21 May 2013

Ouch I'll remember this the next time a female culcidae is digging into my dermis with her probiscs, there was a lot of humor hear in such a dark subject. It is funny how tiny things can have huge repercussions to our own bodies, I must congradulate you on this great work and for using the word plasmodiums' withing a sentece that is not distracting.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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