Tinted Window Poem by Garfield Grimmett
Tinted Window
Lookin through a tinted window
everything is dark and unclear
cant see the brightness in life
only can see the shadows that cast over it
wondering, waiting, for this window to be removed
wondering, waiting, for this heart to be soothed.
days, weeks, months, years,
still looking through this tinted window
everything still remains dark and unclear
is their anything better?
or is life a series of tinted window....that can only be broken if you choose to break it.
copyright 2008 Garfield Grimmett
Wow. I can see a lot of potential in you. Keep at it, very very good. Interesting concept.
Garfield wonderfully creative and well penned..reminded of one I wrote years ago...check it out..on my site 'Stained Glass Window' thanks Barry
Brilliant poem, to get the best view of life you must see it unobstructed, go out, rather then watch from with-in. a beautiful piece. keep writing.
Interesting use of a tinted window. Brilliant work and a good write.
Your window on the world is tinted. A fascinating use of metaphor. Very orginal. Ten for you. Kindest regards, Sandra
good but I think it could be a lil better just in the fact of how short it is and the underlying of more needed information and story....still well writen though +
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 4:03:00 AM # 1.0.0.1119
lasting months, hope mine doesnt last yrs. what a waste-we must broke through! sherri