Timing Is All That You Need To Pull Off A Brilliant Suicide Scheme Poem by Seairra Kyger

Timing Is All That You Need To Pull Off A Brilliant Suicide Scheme

Rating: 4.3


These problems are so systematic
What’s the point with this reaction
Maybe were both to charismatic
Or there's no more attraction
So why are you being so frantic
Lets side step our negative action
Can we be just a bit more dramatic
And pretend it never really happened
Approching this very diplomatic
I won’t give you the satisfaction
I won't mixed this up with unwanted static
Of my simple dissatisfaction

I think I might be crazy
I think you might be to
How can we satisfy to need
For blood
Let it bleed
Am I going crazy
Are you going crazy to
How do we react to the need
For blood
Close these wounds for me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about a couple who love either but are not good for each other so they are driving each other crazy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 16 December 2009

very dark and brooding... i love the ending also as bryan said. great! keep at it. -killy

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Bryan Alexander 16 December 2009

close your wounds for me.......I like these lines, good job

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Hippie Girl 16 December 2009

Love it because it's so true! Especially for me.

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Christina Phan 16 December 2009

wow fight n argument n its very gd 10+++ i like it so much

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