Timeless Poem by Andre Brown

Timeless



If every star in the sky represents 1 second I think about you...imagine,
As I gaze at the cosmos every second is worth having,
I drift into the milky way with the memories of each day, what should I do..what should I say,
I marvel at your beauty,
O shining star only if you knew me,
When I see you I wish you could see what I see,
moreover in that manner I wish you could see me.

Thursday, April 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 24 April 2014

I like this poem and the general idea, but I feel it would come across even better if you were to leave out the @'s and fill in correctly with the actual word at. It really is a nice, sensitive piece though!

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Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2014

you could see what I see, fine, I like it.

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