Timeless Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Timeless

Rating: 3.8


I awake form the first touch of sun rays
settling on my face
I don't feel its warmth
there are walls between us
only light enters my eyes without blinding
just a gentle reminder
I don't have to open them
I may surrender

My lips begin to curve into a smile of freedom
my hands may dance upon the surface of the pillow
I leave my mind blank
thoughts have a way
of erasing contentment
not the flute of the heart
I allow it to beat without the drums
of time
give me a moment to breath
and sing eternal songs
of the day to come

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

Beautiful poem, very meaningful.

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Alan Halford 05 August 2012

Just love the flow...it has moved me..well done. Alan

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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 04 August 2012

Lovely, .... Nice one, great start, wonderful denoument... Good one! ~TT~

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Hamid Negah 03 August 2012

good starting and good ending, thank you i love it.

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Captain Cur 03 August 2012

This poem starts very lighthearted, then slowly delves deeper with a very moving rhythm and tone. I love your work.

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