Timeless...! ! ! ! ! Poem by thomas coltrin

Timeless...! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.5


Its hard to feel the feelings dead
Confusion’s more then in my head,
I don’t know what to do im lost
I guess that is, those are my thoughts.

And now im here just by my self
No right, no left, no up or down,
No back road streets, no gravel road
I guess I will somehow go on.

I want you to feel bad for me
I think that is, what is to be…
And if im wrong, I feel I am
Please go on, and don’t just stand.

And to my love….

From time to time
From shore to shore.
From twelve o’clock
and then beyond..
Please think of me…
I know you will
Please think of me
The wounds will heal

Another tear that’s been dropped down
I watch it as it falls on ground,
It splashes all around the floor
And on the floor the blood is warm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Douglass (Fifita) 12 September 2009

it was a good poem and i hope u elaborate on it in further poems. it was raw and beautiful, easy to relate to... but one thingi loved about it most was how although it's ur own others can relate to it. loved the ending too...'on the floor the bloods still warm'...

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Carl Harris 10 September 2009

Though not a pleasant poem, this is overall a well expressed one which told a convincing story consistently from beginning to end. You have made progress in your desire to express your emotions, feelings and experiences, and the younger poets on poem hunter will surely be attracted to your poetic ability. Carl.

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