Time To Leave ~ Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Time To Leave ~

Rating: 5.0


If to someone
Your love
Impart...,
Time to leave
Don’t start!

The innocent gaze
Of your eyes
Softly ties
Words of byes

Of my icy stare
Icy hand
Don’t feel uneasy
No demand

Your will
Might break
Soon or late
The tale of life
Love and hate

Though we live
In a world
Depart
Your bloom
Won’t fade
In my heart

(2009/11/17)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 17 November 2009

i enjoyed this poem.. of coming and goings.. each night imparts to day...again....iip thank you..

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Tsira Goge 17 November 2009

Than sad, so especially sweetly - a song of nightingale...10.... Tsira

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Emma Adamyan 17 November 2009

Dear friend, Amir.... Spring has gone long ago and the other hasn`t come yet, but u`ve already shared with us ur fresh spring notes of poetry. i thank u for the invitation, u know i share the same taste in poetry with u,10+

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M M 17 November 2009

A very lovely poem... What could determine a time to leave if love is shared? If Love is here, the profound feelings it created can only last forever, in some way, as what has been share still is and will always be lively in our deepest heart. 10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 December 2009

Catrina Heart ~Merry Xmas & A Happy New Year~ (11/17/2009 10: 14: 00 AM) wonderful poem shared here.........well done! ! !

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 December 2009

Ency Bearis (11/17/2009 7: 52: 00 AM) If we live in a world Depart Your bloom won't fade in my heart a realistic and true of the last stanza....nice poem all through so meaningful....10

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Anjali Sinha 26 November 2009

true love always blooms it never fades good poem -10 anjali

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Sandra Fowler 26 November 2009

You sing like your namesake, the nightingale. A beautiful testimony to love's enduring ways. Always your friend, Sandra

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 November 2009

Interesting poem... 'If to someone your love impart..., time to leave Don't start Love belongs to each individual to share and delight in. Thus both the the giver and receiver should feel love's bliss, together is fine or separate is fine, for your love belongs to you, as my love belongs to me. I just share it with whom ever wishes to share in it with me. A good write and a 10+++

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