Time Stop Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Time Stop

Rating: 5.0


The sparkle in your eyes
Gives me a long stare
It halts the time
Theory of love share

(2008/5/24)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 24 May 2008

A very beautiful short poem! A sparkle caught into 4 eloquent lines! Very well written! 10 for you!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 May 2008

great piece full of deep meanings.as deep as your wise thought.keep going pal.

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Lynda Robson 24 May 2008

Beautiful Persian, love can make time stand still, thanks for this, Lynda xx

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~ Jon London ~ 24 May 2008

Persian my friend...all I can say is Wow.....time stop, loves power...the ultimate power over all. Amazing piece my friend '10' Best wishes Jon.

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Tsira Goge 24 May 2008

Perfectly speak the Nightingale, only the love the all-powerful can stop time. You are fine Ashug, Thank you for This. Kindest Regards, Tsira

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Thad Wilk 24 May 2008

Her stare makes time stand still, twas love that halted time Hopefully your theory will, come true for you and share a love sublime! ! Great read, short and sweet! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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