Time Slips Through Poem by Heather Burns

Time Slips Through

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The foundation
is cracked
letting time
slip through.

A flood of
memories
approach the
shore
raindrops keep
falling
touching thoughts
haunting her
existence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 28 July 2013

so nice is the poem for its beauty lies in tone and sweet words.. like it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Beautiful images nicely presented. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Powerful imaginary thoughts...Still haunting her existence, though the foundations is cracked...Different thoughts are coming to my mind...Very Beautiful and I liked it...

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 July 2013

Time slips Thoughts breaks Vision fads Existence questions Priority changes.

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Nader Baheri 27 July 2013

powerful imaginary thoghts.~nb

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