Time's Flight Poem by Nosheen Irfan
Time's Flight
Together we felt the caresses of the breeze
Together we heard the song of the rain
Drowned in love’s ecstasy
We had a vision of the paradise
Hands clasped, hearts entwined
Beauty abundant, love ripe
A pretty picture we made
Crowned in the glory of affection abound
Beauty, delight and love mingled
Petrified us into submission
Trees danced, wind whistled
Above our bowed heads
We lived and lived in the heart of love
Drank from its well, rested in its lap
The air was thick with the spring of life
Blossoms were all around
Moments passed, feelings subsided
A fleeting image it all became
Vanished from the sight and mind both
A victim of time’s inscrutable flight.
A fabulous poem.... fascinating poetic expression! Deserves top score!
Wonderfully worded work that leaps with love and dances with delight. Well done my friend!
In the last stasnza this vision of a perfectly balanced love has vanished in TIME'S FLIGHT, B-U-T in the fourth stanza you wrote: WE LIVED AND LIVED IN THE HEART OF LOVE and the whole stanza graced us with the fulfillment of love-hopes. Mymind jumped back to the fourth stanza after reading the last one. And guess what? TIME had circled around and his flight became a homecoming and the two faithful lovers were once again embracing IN THE HEART OF LOVE! Isn't that a wonderful change of events?
Time is the culprit and a cruel passerby, it sucks and drain everything from us and then laugh....A thought provoking poem, As usual 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 8:29:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
fleeting clock on the wall tells story of them all