Time Out Poem by maria laura balbuena

Time Out

Rating: 5.0


Sometime it's a good feeling to be alone
Before I always complain it's too long
But I've realize sometimes it helped
To grasped the things that's turningj on my head.

To be alone you can enjoy what's around
To reward for what I've done
Giving time for myself,
To enjoy and recall the best things on my shelves.

I don't want to get used to it
Coz I might neglect something from it
I don't want that time will come I will regret
To be not I'm your arms and to be alone which I'm enjoying it.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Laura Balbuena 13 September 2011

Thanks so much Romeo for your great appreciation with my piece! and thank you also for rating it 10++! thank you so much! God bless!

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Romeo Della Valle 12 September 2011

Independently of how we feel around people, many times we need to be alone, undisturbed and surrounded just by silence so we can peacefully reconcile our hearts and minds! You have done a superb job here with this thought provoking write! 10+++ As of matter of fact, I was feeling this way all week and I wrote the poem titled: AN INSCRUTABLE SILENCE which I hope you can read whenever time permits! Keep inspiring the World Maria with more of those poetic and talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ..

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