Time And Space Poem by David Whalen

Time And Space

Rating: 5.0


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Rend a hole in time
And space…Watch all the other
Dimensions spill through
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Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 06 February 2016

If the dimension breaks all we have are spaces and time till it collides again we will lost because so much they are..too travel..too far beautiful work David :)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 06 February 2016

Excellent senryu and very introspective piece, the last line as a great impact.

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David Whalen

David Whalen

Covington Kentucky
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