Till You Hit The Ground Poem by Incognito Pseudonymosx

Till You Hit The Ground

Rating: 4.5


The twist of life never fails to surprise me,
even the one's who are hidden, they all agree,
they grow and grow, until no more,
and provoked others to go with the flow,

Is this how it should be?
life ablaze or just serenity,
the burning passion, the painful glee,
life's not always what it seems to be.

It will continue to cripple you down,
it will never stop until you frown,
and then you win, you get the crown,
you can't win without fighting,
till you hit the ground

Saturday, August 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 29 August 2015

let life continues, very fine one, go on..

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Chinedu Dike 04 September 2015

To conceive of life without difficulties is indeed an existential absurdity. Where the going gets tough, we always see the tough get going. A good piece of poetry bristling with insight. I like the rhyme scheme of the Poe and the poet's conviction. Thanks for sharing Arca.

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Incognito Pseudonymosx 01 September 2015

Thank you :) i really appreciate your comment

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Incognito Pseudonymosx 01 September 2015

Thank you :) i really appreciate the comment

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 August 2015

a well penned poem indeed.. only 15 but you write better than many 'mature poet'.. ;)

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

A life lesson in a wonderful poem

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