Till Deat And Then On Poem by Melissa Ferrer

Till Deat And Then On

Rating: 4.3


I remember you standing there
as if you had nothing to fear
With no hate
No seeming torture or sorrow
You hugged me
You told me you loved me
No matter what might happen
No matter what you might do.

I had never knew
The horror of the things you might do
Why could you not tell me
prepare me for the pain
I might feel
For the pain
That will never heal
Did you only think of yourself.

That nigh you left
togo
'home'
you said good bye Ill be back tomorrow
But would you, Could you?
Did you come back?
No.

But still,
I will love you
Till death and then on
For you were my sister
My number one
You not living
Isnt much fun.

So till death and then on
You will be in my memories,
This sorrow is a fee
I have to pay.
Until I see you on my Judgement Day

Till Death and then on
You will be my number one.

(In memory of my loving sister and Godmother Sophia Chery)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trevor Denniss 08 April 2006

As you know Melissa I fully empathise with this and find it very moving. I like the poem very much - keep sharing your inner self with others and you will touch many hearts. 10 pts from me!

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Charlie Jackson 23 February 2006

I love this poem...it's touching and you should be very proud of your work. Well done!

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Daniel Tyler 21 February 2006

A very moving poem melissa. Well done.

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Dan Brown 18 February 2006

A very moving poem on your thoughts and feelings about your sister. You should be proud that you can express your emotions like this, I'm sure she would be. Dan x x

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