Till Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Till



Woke with the rain, on a
sunshiny day. While the birds
outside my window, sing and
play. And I light a candle, to
chase away the gray. Till the
flutter of images fade. And
his voice, breaks way.

Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,moments,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2018

This is a beautiful poem having thrilling expression with nice collocation. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rebecca Navarre 09 December 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For your beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry is filled with ever such beautiful spirit, images and heart, that touches and moves the reader from the start! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2018

Lovely series of images, so beautifully stitched together... “waking up with rain” is such a wonderful expression. It is such a nice experience to wake up into a sunny but raining morning, with the bright rays of sun reaching out to embrace you, through the shards of rain.10+++.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 December 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For you very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry is painted with ever such deeply beautiful heart, and meaning, that captures the reader with the feeling! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 December 2018

Indeed His Voice, such a mesmerizing devotional, loveliest poem ever worded in brevity. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Vote. God´s Blessings in Abundance be upon thee, amen.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2018

Thank you so much! .. Sylvia, For such a beautifully kind and thoughtful reply! .. I look forward greatly, to visiting your page! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings, God bless! ..

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