Tides Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Tides

Rating: 5.0


When the world stops, and time
seems to have died, And all you
can do is pray inside. As tears
slip to the tides. As we wait,
hands held tight. And cling,
to the ever moving light.

Monday, November 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moments,prayers,time,god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 27 November 2018

Hi Becca, The power of prayer.. When the world stops, and time seems to have died, all you can do is pray inside Well written.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For such a beautifully heart felt reply! .. Your poetry is painted such heart inside, with beauty oceans wide, that touches readers each time! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

Time dies a little and waves move ahead. Tides of life sea we feel amazingly. Ever moving light shows us path to heaven. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2018

Thank you! ..Kumarmani, ever so much for such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. Like the morning so bright, your poetry holds such beauty and light, that brings such much meaning and delight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 November 2018

Praying At Stake! ...../// wonderful writing

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2018

Thank you! .. Mahtab, For your beautifully kind response! .. Your poetry holds a beautiful spiritual feel, that touches the hearts who read here! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2018

Prayers can move mountains...........10++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2018

Thank you! .. Bernard, For such a beautifully heart felt reply! .. Your poetry sings with such inspiration, beauty and heart that touches souls, from the start! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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