! ! ! ! ! Thus..... Poem by Neela Nath Das

! ! ! ! ! Thus.....

Rating: 5.0


Stillness pounces on night.
the sound of the wind,
rattling, I'm hearing.
The tallest tree of my yard
is bending to touch the soil.
How many years have passed it
could not get the smell of the
earth! I know the couple of sparrows
are chirping out of fear.
Their nest is now on ground!
Had my mom been here, she would
have alerted of the wind,
of storm, of worst weather!
Thus, she brought me up
with alerts and warnings!
So that my nest can't be broken,
in strong wind, in storm,
in the worst weather!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Like a waves of the sea that flow gently LIKE

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Yash Shinde 23 March 2014

.......great personification-tree bending down to smell the earth! ...lovely and insightful write dear.......

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 April 2013

A beauteous poem with innate meaning is amazing! Lovely!

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Valerie Dohren 14 April 2013

Lovely poem, great metaphor Hari.

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David Wood 11 April 2013

I really enjoyed this poem, I read it through twice. I love the imagery you paint.

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