Through The Way Poem by Sabari Vas

Through The Way

Rating: 5.0


I remember,
two years before
I started my voyage
on a river by a boat

It was my happiest
ever moment in life
I enjoyed it a lot
It was full of excitement

It was now a past memory
because the river now ended
into a large sea
I now confused where to row my boat

But there are many payment ships
to reach the final destiny
But i am royal
I will not take it

I have decided now,
I will jump into the sea
and reach my destiny through
pain and hard work.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabari V R 03 May 2011

Through my +1, +2 classes

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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