Kolawole Ajao

Rookie - 1 Points (Akure, Ondo State Nigeria)

Three Birds - Poem by Kolawole Ajao

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Three birds perched
One flew away
Two remained perching
Another flew away
One remained perching
Another flew away
No bird remained
Three birds flew
They flew away
Out of sighting.


Comments about Three Birds by Kolawole Ajao

  • Rookie Jim Troy (8/14/2011 4:09:00 PM)

    Following the master's plan and to me it is lonely and haunting in a vision
    I miss the birds..........................Nice Poetry My Friend

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  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/16/2010 10:35:00 AM)

    Very deep poetry …childhood …young age…old age…next finality…wonderful… congrats …
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zaynab Elzain (7/7/2010 2:45:00 AM)

    cool poem.. i wish i was one of this birds (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,391 Points Hans Vr (6/30/2010 9:46:00 AM)

    I like it also. Looks like a reality in life. Sometimes all go flying and we are left behind. Luckily our Creator is always by our side. Indeed a very nice, cute short poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/28/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    So cute! Migration...to return again. Lovely little poem; D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 24, 2010



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