Theodora (Theo) Onken

Veteran Poet - 1,034 Points (Washington State)

Thread's Unraveled~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Always leaves me with uncomfortable
With sheer disdain in my mind...
Such drab grey twig's and uncertain wings
Devoured by your word's oft' unkind;

To revel in the death of Springs sweet wren
In death - it lay upon it's back
Upon a table and next to a spoon
A victim of another 'Abstract' attack?

Careless greed and substance abuse rules you
Your insane world of cold and calculating minds
Where birds of a feather delight in your weather
For they declare you quite divine;

The world of voo-doo and hexes is alive and well
Across the country pond a coven forms their ring
It's an unfeeling - amoral - group of robotic creatures
For it is evil curses their voices sing;

By, Theodora Onken

April 4,2014

Topic(s) of this poem: art

Comments about Thread's Unraveled~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Veteran Poet - 1,034 Points Theodora Onken (4/5/2014 1:36:00 AM)

    Gajanan, thank you for your kind words. Yes, it is a calculating and troubled world. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 55,199 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    good writing, I like it, here we are really in calculating world. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2014

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