Thousand Desire Poem by Shameem Haider Rao

Thousand Desire

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A thousand desire in my heart
Always remain desire as gifted by destiny

I send many pray to the sky
But reflect back as an unread poetry

Carvan of dersire is so strange
Often pass by close roads

Whole life spent in weaving wishes
Now I trap by web of desire

The darkness eveloped everyting
See! How silly m I? Every night I wait for sunlight

Desire and me have close relation
We both will say good bye together.


Shameem hyder Rao

Tuesday, June 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yu-ying Lee 10 June 2014

Such a deep poem! Really, I agree with you, sometimes our wishes won't come true and perhaps never will.

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Kirti Sharma 10 June 2014

thank you for inviting me to read your poem.. i can relate to it very well.. even i have wish and m hopeful that it will come true.. coz..m scared of having a close relation with desire.. thanks for sharing.. read my poems too...

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Shania K. Younce 12 June 2014

This is a very lovely poem! Bien!

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2014

Shameem, a wonderful thought here you have woven.Waiting for someone special is a part of love.Sometimes unfulfilled but a ray of hope stays with the sense of loss.Loved.

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Hazel Durham 05 November 2016

Desires is you, as you wait for sunlight, as you are caught in a web of desire, emotions filled with excitement to fall in love, is all of you! Beautiful write Shameem!

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Payal Parande 09 July 2014

Desire and me have close relation We both will say good bye together. there are two kinds of desire some desires are rode to our dreams and some well they are silly ones but they do keep us alive and give us hope, your poem reflects great deal of hops, wonderful job

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Poetheart Morgan 19 June 2014

Men and desires.....You cant craving without suffer.....you want and when you see...you always want more...that is not our fault....is life that jokes with us....Beatifull

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Patricia Grantham 18 June 2014

We all have many desires in life. Some are valid and some are just wishful thinking. Still wishing something would happen is healthy if comes from the heart and well meaning. Nice poem.

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woow Shameem mmmh nice poem, it really sad though cause some they say good things happen to those who wait, but i say not all the time due to the fact that sometimes we wait for something that was never and can never in a million years appear.waiting is good only if you know wht u waiting for and you know that someday whatever desire you had will come to pass.

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