Thoughts Poem by Howard Johnson

Thoughts

Rating: 4.9


Creative thoughts-I let them dance alone
On empty shores of hopeful bliss
Their beauty can my life enhance
As your tender kiss

Creative thoughts-Not touched by things
Nor pierced by words or sound,
Or distractive clowns
In ecstasy
I feel their fashion of lifting wings
That raise me far from distractive things.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 14 August 2006

Howard, a creative thought about the essence of creative thoughts... well done! ! Brian

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Jolanta Gradowicz 19 October 2006

Creative thougts are like birds in the sky - no limits and no bars in cages... This poem shows that your thoughts are very creative, Howard. Jolanta

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R H 08 November 2006

Some lovely images Howard - particularly liked the sense of freedom you conveyed in the first stanza - 'On empty shores of hopeful bliss' - beautiful...Justine

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Diane Violet 15 November 2006

Very creative indeed Howard, I especially like 'I feel their fashion of lifting wings'......our conscious thoughts lifted to higher plains. All the best, Diane

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Carolyn Sears 29 November 2006

Creative..Brilliant..It captivating..What more can i say.. Carolyn

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Chuck Audette 28 May 2009

do love the metaphors you've made of your thoughts here...chuck

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Latasha Dixon 13 May 2008

Sounds like you have a beautiful mind..... But you know you can bring it to life

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Tsira Goge 11 April 2008

'Their beauty can my life enhance ' - Howard, It is very fine poems which is tamed by romantic metaphors. Tsira

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 March 2008

A very interesting examination of creativity. Greenwolfe 1962

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Sue Crocker 06 March 2008

Beautiful verse, so eloquently written. Thank you for sharing. Sue

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