Thoughts Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Thoughts

Rating: 4.9


Sometimes our thoughts
Pass like geese
Flying in tandem
Some perch in the mind
Cling as a leech
Sucking your sanity
Still others visit
From time to time
And tingle the mind.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Thursday, December 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 December 2020

A well penned composition. Truly splendid and brilliant.....5 stars *****

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Sandra Feldman 18 December 2020

So beautiful this poems on thoughts, that come and go. A mystery we can't let go, But that is so fulfilling, like this lovely poem, that with such deep inspiration, you have gifted us with. Your poems and your person are such unforgettable, bliss.

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Kostas Lagos 18 December 2020

Nice one Rose Marie. Clever and well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 December 2020

thought provoking sometimes thought comes as savior, sometimes comes as destroyer!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 December 2020

Beautiful presentation of thoughts swimming in our mind like tides in an ocean along with their life spans and other specifications, in the poetic expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Anjandev Roy 17 February 2021

Wonderful.......like it, dear poetess.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2021

Most accurate observation! Magnificent contemplation... admired

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2020

Beautifully expressed. Striking analogy you bring in your words.5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 December 2020

Fabulous poem on thoughts. I love your comparison with geese and leech. How they perch on your mind and cling on as a leech. Enjoyed reading this unique poem on thoughts, dear Rose.

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Rose Marie a beautifully written poem presenting a new line of thought and very poetic expressed way, when addressing our thought gathering processes. Wonderfully unique and a real joy to read and always of interest when one delivers there own thoughts on the matter. Five worthy stars and while I'm thinking about it a hearty big thank you too. Take care Rose Marie and simply enjoy life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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