Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 143 Points (Kolkata, India)

Thoughts - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

I searched for those delicate words,
To paint a vivid picture of ecstasy.
Fairytales and moist dreams encircled my heart
And powerful libido reigned my solitary soul..
It was pitch dark all around,
As intense pain enshrouded my thoughts,
And small drops of tears
Thus began to rain,
Keeping the unfinished poem
Drowned in your lost love,
With failed efforts of the broken pen!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri


Comments about Thoughts by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Gold Star - 14,700 Points * Sunprincess * (11/1/2012 7:42:00 PM)

    wow..beautifully written and expressed on lost love..fabulous.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 13 Points Champs Ulysses Cabinatan (9/19/2012 12:07:00 AM)

    powerful poem. good choice of words... can feel the emotion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Bob Brown (8/17/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    Reaching the deepest soul..superb! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (8/16/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    So painful picture of a broken heart! Touched me deeply. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, September 17, 2012


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