Thought Poem by Aftab Alam

Thought

Rating: 4.6


She lays nude, on the lap of my mind,
I care and ease until stars freeze
Her whisper, a calm breeze,
I lay asleep; dreaming to find...

Thousands of pigeon flaying into void
I can see..
I wish how it should be!
Then sudden
Falcon falls upon me
Uncoiling kills
Blood spills
Heard her sweet call
Where ye are
Come to me
I am thy thought.
'Falcons sat on cliff, stared void'

She lays robed on silken, tighten her lips
I put on.. to see her face with many clips
Moon like face and cloud like hairs
Pearls like eyes and dew like tears

Melodious gait and dog like a pet
Snake like Hiss, magnate like kiss
Figure like a pose, laugh like a rose
O heaven give me thy dose..

Thought bewildered me
This is the bewildering world
Take my thought and free my mind
I’m in search of peace,
I will find...I will find....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am dreaming always dreaming My dream Why the Dove is killed by falcon, innocent are killed by the cruel and corruption has became the core option of the modern world, people die with hunger we talk about religion, we talk and advocate the equality of women and again we make separate arrangement for them. In India we have reserve constituency for women whether it is for panchayat or for ward electon, we abuse the politician, we struggle for change of Govt.Again we have chance to change this for every five year...I am confused..In fact our goal is not clear or otherwise we are being enstigated by political parties.recently Anna Hazare movement world has witnessed He blamed Ruling parties and softly to opponant, Baba RamDev Biased by Opposition basically BJP(Bartiya janata party) ...Now Kejriwal registerd his party as a aam aadami party(Common people party) .He is happy as all big shots are joining.once they used to have the high chair.Greed of power I suppose.root level politicians are restricted by this act..I am worried..now I want to find my own way to ease the people..I welcome you all to read and comment or any suggestion from your side thank you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

an excellent piece of poetry. I'm in search of peace. I will find. I will find.

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Frank James Davis 02 April 2013

So artistically expressed, Aftab! A most worthwhile offering.

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David Wood 31 March 2013

This is a well constructed poem about a difficult situation in India. Quite thought provoking.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 31 March 2013

wonderful thought that speak as the spear!

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